Learning to Cook Rice Without Oil – Revised

 When I was a child, I learned to cook rice with my grandparents instead of my mother. At that time, my mother worked long hours, so my grandfather and grandmother taught me their traditional method. First, they showed me how to wash the rice and measure the water carefully. Later, I met a kind woman from a small town who taught me how to prepare rice without using a single drop of oil. That moment changed my view of cooking. Now, with my teammate, I enjoy learning more about that town’s culture, recipes, and traditions. Their way of cooking and living is simple, healthy, and full of meaning.


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Annotations:

  • Improved sentence structure (“instead of” adds clarity).

  • Added adjectives (“traditional,” “carefully,” “healthy”) for detail.

  • Replaced “how I saw cooking” with “my view of cooking” for smoother phrasing.

  • Added “recipes” to enrich the cultural context.

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